Monday, May 9, 2016

Walking to the cabin

WALT put pictures into our reader's mind

I walked through a forest to a log cabin

Two people named En and Jen walked through the gate and into the deep dark forest. Even though it was a sunny day,with no clouds there was no sunlight in the forest. The path made a crunching sound because it was made out of gravel. As En and Jen got deeper into the forest it started to turn night and the hills got steeper. The moon reflected on En and Jen's eyes.En looked at the map and turned left but Jen said to go right so they did. Jen said ‘Get your lamp out ’ . En nodded . The moon shined brighter. En saw that the tree's branches were very twisted and they were very moldy.There was a howling sound sound, The wolfs was as noisy as an elephant.Suddenly Jen saw something and got scared, so did En. The cabin was made out of wood that has a dark colour.Jen Disliked the cabin “It’s the most hideous cabin I’ve seen in my whole life, but she had no choice, she couldn't go back because it was too dark and scary for her.  

By Mei


1 comment:

  1. I really liked the way you described the cabin part.

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